Negative Critiques

For the first negative i would choose would be number 20a, this photo shows good candid action. I caught a picture of zack looking between 2 girls faces. It doesnt fill y=the frame too well but i like the action. The focus is pretty good, but the composition could use some work.
For the second negative i would choose 23a, i caught alot of people in one shot but there is focuz=s on one girl. Once again the composition is a little bad but the candid action is wonderful. The girl in the photo is smiling but its not posed.

Filling the Frame

I think that this photo fills the frame quite well. Its not just the main object im focusing on, its both objects. The cup fills half the frame and the face fills the other half. There is no other space.

Action and Emotion

This photo shows alot of action, the fire and candid movements create a great sense of action. The fire can even be construed as a the emotion of the photo.

The Story

I think this one tells a story just through its image. The book gives a sense of bein in a story, then the girl in the back could be involved in some way. To me it expresses a story of knowledge and learning.

03 Fall Winner Adv BW still life

I like this picture, the lighting effects are really good. The dark image with the lights on the chair add a great detail in the photo. I love how much this picture makes me think, its so odd. I really respect the composition of this picture its very set up but i feel like its still candid.

Pinhole review 2

I really dont like this photo, its just not interesting. There is no people or anything interesting just 2 blurry cars. I just really dont care for this picture at all. It looks very nice but i dont see anything i like other than the quality of the photo itself.

Pinhole review

this picture has a great setup to it. Its a little out of focus but there is no people in it, but it still shows action. the picture seems like its still but with action its weird. i think the parts that are out of focus add to the eerieness of the photo. All in all i really like it.